Ready to shine on the ParaPro Writing test? This guide equips you to master editing skills, ensuring polished writing as a teaching assistant!
What Is Editing?
Following our exploration of pre-writing, spelling errors, parts of speech, sentence parts, punctuation, and usage, this ParaPro Writing Study Guide focuses on editing—the process of reviewing and revising a draft to improve grammar, clarity, and style. Editing involves correcting errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement), enhancing sentence structure, and ensuring consistency in tone. The exam tests your ability to edit written passages, often in the context of supporting student writing. As a paraprofessional, editing skills help you provide constructive feedback to students, improving their writing quality.
These skills are essential for addressing 10-15 of the 90 exam questions, which may involve identifying errors or suggesting improvements in sample texts.
Why Editing Matters
Approximately 10-15 of the 90 ParaPro questions evaluate your ability to edit writing for accuracy and clarity. Effective editing ensures that ideas are communicated clearly, errors are minimized, and the writing meets academic standards—key responsibilities for teaching assistants. Mastering editing not only boosts your exam performance but also enables you to support students in producing polished, professional writing, directly enhancing their academic success.
Types of Editing
Correcting Grammar and Syntax Errors
Grammar and syntax editing focuses on fixing errors in sentence structure, such as subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and pronoun usage. For example, “She run fast” should be “She runs fast” to match the singular subject with the correct verb form. To edit effectively, read each sentence carefully, checking for agreement (e.g., “The team are” should be “The team is”), proper tense (e.g., “He walked yesterday” not “He walk yesterday”), and correct pronoun case (e.g., “Me and him” should be “He and I”). A useful strategy is to break complex sentences into smaller parts to isolate errors. Another tip is to read sentences aloud—errors often “sound” wrong. This skill is crucial for the exam and for helping students avoid common grammatical mistakes in their writing.
Example 1
Directions: Identify the grammar error in the sentence.
“The boys runs to the park.”
- A) No error
- B) “runs” should be “run”
- C) “boys” should be “boy”
- D) “park” should be “parks”
Answer: B) “runs” should be “run”
Explanation: “Boys” (plural) requires the plural verb “run,” not “runs.” Check subject-verb agreement.
Example 2
Directions: Identify the grammar error in the sentence.
“Me and her went to school.”
- A) No error
- B) “Me and her” should be “She and I”
- C) “went” should be “go”
- D) “school” should be “schools”
Answer: B) “Me and her” should be “She and I”
Explanation: Use “She and I” as the subject (nominative case), not “Me and her.”
Improving Sentence Clarity
Editing for clarity ensures sentences are easy to understand by removing ambiguity, redundancy, and awkward phrasing. For example, “The book was read by her quickly” can be clearer as “She quickly read the book.” To improve clarity, use active voice when possible (e.g., “The dog chased the cat” instead of “The cat was chased by the dog”), eliminate unnecessary words (e.g., “very unique” becomes “unique”), and break long sentences into shorter ones for readability. A practical tip is to ask, “Can this be misinterpreted?” If yes, rephrase. Another strategy is to ensure subjects and verbs are close together to avoid confusion. This type of editing is vital for the exam, where you may need to revise student work, and in the classroom to help students communicate ideas effectively.
Example 1
Directions: Identify the clarity issue in the sentence.
“The project was completed by the team very successfully.”
- A) No issue
- B) Use active voice: “The team completed the project successfully”
- C) “very” is redundant
- D) “project” is ambiguous
Answer: B) Use active voice: “The team completed the project successfully”
Explanation: Active voice makes the sentence clearer and more direct.
Example 2
Directions: Identify the clarity issue in the sentence.
“She bought a very nice new blue dress yesterday.”
- A) No issue
- B) “very” is redundant
- C) Use active voice
- D) “dress” is ambiguous
Answer: B) “very” is redundant
Explanation: “Very” adds little meaning; “nice” is sufficient for clarity.
Ensuring Consistency in Style and Tone
Editing for style and tone ensures the writing maintains a consistent voice and formality level appropriate for the audience. For example, an academic essay should avoid slang (e.g., “kids” should be “children”) and maintain a formal tone throughout. To edit for consistency, identify the intended tone (e.g., formal, informal) and audience (e.g., teachers, students), then check for shifts (e.g., switching from “students” to “guys”). Also, ensure consistent formatting, such as using the same tense (e.g., don’t switch from past to present) or point of view (e.g., avoid shifting from third to first person). A tip is to read the piece as a whole to spot tone shifts, and create a style checklist (e.g., “use formal language, past tense”) to guide your edits. This skill helps on the exam and in the classroom when refining student writing for specific purposes.
Example 1
Directions: Identify the style inconsistency in the sentence.
“The study was fascinating, and it totally blew my mind.”
- A) No inconsistency
- B) “totally blew my mind” is too informal
- C) “fascinating” is too formal
- D) “study” should be “research”
Answer: B) “totally blew my mind” is too informal
Explanation: The informal phrase clashes with the formal tone of “fascinating”; revise to “was highly impressive.”
Example 2
Directions: Identify the style inconsistency in the sentence.
“Students learn best when they’re engaged, but I think kids also need breaks.”
- A) No inconsistency
- B) “kids” should be “students” for consistency
- C) “learn” should be “study”
- D) “engaged” is too formal
Answer: B) “kids” should be “students” for consistency
Explanation: Use “students” throughout to maintain a consistent, formal tone.
Checking for Redundancy and Wordiness
Editing for redundancy and wordiness involves removing unnecessary words or phrases that repeat ideas or overcomplicate sentences. For example, “She nodded her head in agreement” can be simplified to “She nodded in agreement” since “nodded” implies using the head. To edit, look for repeated ideas (e.g., “future plans” can just be “plans”), overused modifiers (e.g., “very tired” can be “exhausted”), and lengthy phrases that can be shortened (e.g., “due to the fact that” becomes “because”). A strategy is to read each sentence and ask, “Can this be said more concisely?” Another tip is to focus on strong verbs to reduce the need for extra words (e.g., “whispered softly” becomes “whispered”). This editing type ensures concise, impactful writing, a skill tested on the exam and useful for teaching students to write efficiently.
Example 1
Directions: Identify the redundant phrase in the sentence.
“He smiled happily at the good news.”
- A) No redundancy
- B) “happily” is redundant
- C) “good” is redundant
- D) “news” should be “information”
Answer: B) “happily” is redundant
Explanation: “Smiled” implies happiness; “happily” adds no new meaning.
Example 2
Directions: Identify the wordy phrase in the sentence.
“Due to the fact that it rained, we stayed inside.”
- A) No wordiness
- B) “Due to the fact that” should be “Because”
- C) “stayed” should be “remained”
- D) “inside” is unnecessary
Answer: B) “Due to the fact that” should be “Because”
Explanation: “Because” is more concise and equally clear.
Verifying Spelling and Punctuation
Editing for spelling and punctuation ensures the writing is polished and free of mechanical errors. Spelling errors (e.g., “recieve” instead of “receive”) and punctuation mistakes (e.g., missing commas in a list: “apples oranges bananas” should be “apples, oranges, bananas”) can distract readers and reduce credibility. To edit, review for common spelling issues like homophones (e.g., “their” vs. “they’re”) and apply rules like “i before e, except after c.” For punctuation, check for comma splices (e.g., “I ran, I was late” should be “I ran because I was late”), missing apostrophes (e.g., “childrens” should be “children’s”), and proper end punctuation. A tip is to use a checklist: “Check homophones, verify apostrophes, ensure commas separate clauses.” Another strategy is to read backward, word by word, to catch spelling errors you might miss when reading for meaning. This editing is critical for the exam and for helping students produce error-free writing.
Example 1
Directions: Identify the spelling error in the sentence.
“She recieved a gift yesterday.”
- A) No error
- B) “recieved” should be “received”
- C) “gift” should be “guift”
- D) “yesterday” should be “yesturday”
Answer: B) “recieved” should be “received”
Explanation: “Received” follows the “i before e, except after c” rule.
Example 2
Directions: Identify the punctuation error in the sentence.
“I need pens pencils and paper.”
- A) No error
- B) Add commas: “pens, pencils, and paper”
- C) “and” should be “or”
- D) Add a period after “paper”
Answer: B) Add commas: “pens, pencils, and paper”
Explanation: Commas are needed to separate items in a list for clarity.
Reading and Analyzing Editing
On the exam, you’ll edit sample passages by identifying errors in grammar, clarity, style, redundancy, and mechanics. Start by reading the passage for overall meaning, then focus on one editing type at a time: check grammar first, then clarity, and so on. Look for patterns (e.g., repeated tense shifts) and prioritize fixes that improve readability. This process mirrors classroom tasks where you’ll edit student drafts, providing feedback to enhance their writing quality.
Easy Steps to Master Editing
Follow these steps to excel:
- Check grammar: Ensure subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and pronoun usage.
- Improve clarity: Use active voice and simplify awkward phrasing.
- Ensure style consistency: Maintain a formal tone and consistent terminology.
- Eliminate redundancy: Remove unnecessary words and use strong verbs.
- Verify spelling and punctuation: Use a checklist to catch mechanical errors.
Test tip: Edit in passes—focus on one error type per read-through!
Quiz for Topic
Ready to test your skills? Take our 10-question editing quiz below to sharpen your expertise!
Frequently Asked Questions
How do I spot grammar errors?
Check subject-verb agreement, tense, and pronouns; read aloud to hear mistakes. Tip: Break sentences into parts!
What’s the best way to improve clarity?
Use active voice, remove redundancy, and shorten long sentences. Tip: Ask, “Can this be misinterpreted?”
How many editing questions are on the exam?
About 10-15 of 90 questions. Tip: Use our free quizzes to prepare!
Can editing improve my teaching?
Yes! It helps you provide feedback to improve student writing. Tip: Edit student work daily!
Where can I practice more?
Explore our free ParaPro writing tests online. Tip: Focus on one editing type per day!
How do I ensure consistent tone?
Identify the audience and tone, then check for shifts in formality or terminology. Tip: Use a style checklist!
What if I miss spelling errors?
Read backward, word by word, and use a spelling checklist for homophones. Tip: Double-check “i before e” words!